Vila – chapter 5 – final edit
This is the first in a series of small podcasts about day two of my final edit. Today I talk to you about chapters 3-5 of Josephine Marlin and The Alternatives.
Some of the errors I have come across today and yesterday have been the lack of quotations to identify dialogue attribution. I know who’s talking, but there is no way that you would know. I’ve added extra story lines for a more complete tale at specific places throughout the trials and victories experienced by the […]